My Shoe Holaday

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On Monday this little boy came along with some smelly socks on and put them into me after he turned the Xbox's off because it was boring. Then he was running around the yard kicking his ball around from his shoe. Then he wanted to go for a walk to his friend's house to see if he wanted to go outside to play league or do something but he said nah I’ll give it a parst today came and see me later. Then it came the the time he had to do paper's so he came and put me no. “I’ll like to get wore a lot so off he went.

“There it was” Tuesday the very next day of the week” ahhh here he comes again. “yowling and screaming” in a quiet voice. The same thing is happening all over again it’s like I’m dreaming about yesterday. Well I wasn't which is an good thing, I just thought it was happening all over it was a nightmare.

The next day of the week it was Wednesday. Time to get up little dude I’ve got to go town said one of the humans. So then the kid got up, he got up and got dressed. Then he went out grabbed me and put me on. “Off we go”  I worked with my owner to get in the car. “Just sitting there not being used” then we got to town I’ll was heyyyy! I’m being used again around town. Heyyy! I’m home again back in Dobson “I’m going for a walk said my owner.” Off he went “what you doing said my owner?”

Thursday their were thumping across the the floor until the owner's reached the top floor of the house to play the Xbox. Then at 8:30 the tumbling across the floor had stated again. Ban ban ban! one of the owner's had fall down the stairs ouch that hurt. “I whacked my leg on one of the step’s and had slid down the rest of the step’s.

Friday  the farm town. up to the farm guys said one of the owner's “anver boring ride said the shoe” bump bump bump!  We are at the farm now said one of the owners “walking time said one the of the owner’s” look at all the deed lams said one of the owners. Omg that’s a lot of deed larms said my owner. Off we go far a walk over to the house where their is no water said the owner of the house and also take your shoes off “oh no said my shoe’s in a quiet voice”.

Sadly the end of the holiday’s we will have to go back to school now at the very next day so our shoe’s will have the best of the rest of the last day of the holiday. Shoe’s got to go home with it’s owner to do the Evening Star around half of Dobson which I go around and around well my owner bike’s around I get hurt when my face is on the hard ground see you the next holiday’s if I’m still alive.

William