Monday, 27 June 2016

WAR POEM"S

 War poem’s

The soldier's blood fried
Like a bullet in the war
In Gallipoli

The poppies are red
The blood of the dead bodies
On the green stem lines

Australia and
New zealand fight for us so
We can live freely

BY WILLIAM
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 August 2016 at 17:44

    Hi William,I like the way you write your poem.Next time try to do as a poem and it kind of rhyme like (balloon rhymes with moon).

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  2. Anonymous8 September 2016 at 11:36

    HEY!I like the way you wrote your poem.Maybe next time you could make it kind of rhyme.

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  3. Anonymous8 September 2016 at 11:36

    HEY!I like the way you wrote your poem.Maybe next time you could make it kind of rhyme.

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  4. Anonymous12 September 2016 at 19:37

    I didn't relay wont it to rhyme

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